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Wolf bathed in Star-light
2006-11-27
ch 4,
oh my gosh! this is so sad, im crying. macy so nice. and adam so sweet. and logan was wicked. (was he supposed to be the same logan?) i really liked this even tho it was just a short story.
:D:(:D:(:D:(:D:( - the sad faces are cos im crying!
Alcie
2006-04-10
ch 4,
It was sad the whole goodbyes and everything but I liked the way you kind of ended it on a happy note =D Awesome!
VexiVicious
2006-03-18
ch 3,
i keep getting lumps in my throat, beautifully written and wonderful story.. can't wait for the restx
squiggle-line
2006-01-27
ch 1,
Okay, I'm hooked. Please continue!

I think you accidentally switch between first person and third in a couple of the paragraphs...refering to your main character as Macy and then saying I did something...something...
Leslee
2006-01-27
ch 1,
This is so interesting; I can't wait to read more!
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