 ADSpencer 2006-02-16 . chapter 1I love the singsong style; great work. |
 Patricia Louise 2006-01-30 . chapter 1Great poem!! |
 Professor Doctor 2006-01-27 . chapter 1Well, that was sad.
Ari |
 X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-01-27 . chapter 1The rhyming sceme is briliant! I love how it flows so well. Great work, especially since the lack of words, it takes a lot to write a poem that short and make it mean something. Keep writing. |
 Ryukoji 2006-01-27 . chapter 1Hiya! wow. great. sound like how i feel rigth now. ttyl. |
 Cloudsinthesky 2006-01-27 . chapter 1i like very much, brings back forgotten memorys. good job. |