woot i'm in ur story! harley does like ya now! gd work keep it up lol

Hey, great first chapter. I'll have to read the rest later when I get back in three days. So hopefully you can hold out on your impatience for that short amount of time, stay away from plastic spoons and Antony, and not think about castration, =P. Thanks for the reviews by the way. Anyways, I'm in a hurry, so great first chapter. You're a really good writer.

Katie

This story is great. I love all the weird random stuff in it. Probably because I do stuff like that sometimes too.

I totally love the charachter of Alex. He's really interesting. I'd love to find out more about him and his family.

It's so sad that this is getting put on hold. But you gotta do what you gotta do.

yet another good read by Nat!xellent work and keep it up! plz!

(shame i woznt in it thogh!)

fyn! i take bak wot i sed aboot Nathan. so lemme guess,tom based on mike by any chance? everything points dat way!! keep writing! luvin it babes!

Chocolate is NASTY. I absolutely HATE chocolate. Don't ask why...it's just like that.

AWESOME STORY! xD Sounds like Adam's stalking her...or maybe she's subconciously (spelling?) stalking him. Or maybe the music is just getting to my head. xD Keep writing.

IceCold13

nice, i especialy like the way im shown...i just no im funny...andnthe bit about gregs thought process...i don't know how he puts up with you...

hey nati rli like ur story it well gd!lv vonnie

I do love fudge especially on a brownie! *drools on the computer* And it is true my siblings did drop me or more like watched me roll of the bed when my mom left me in their care, then she came and she did not see me, when she asked them, they said they watched me fall of the bed! Siblings! Well anyway Tom is an **! And I understand about the exams I'm going through finals right now andthey are hell! I hate them! Teachers keep using old and improved methods to torture us poor creatures who are blessed (cursed) with a brain.

hey i finally read it! its v good, specially the bit with me innit lol lol!tom's an **!! i've decided!!adam sounds gorgeous, but y wood he work wit Nathan ew!! ur Leah iz exactly the same in reel lyfe! spot on description!

really good, as usual, and now i see what u mean.

rob

yes, exams, school and the lack of modern day miricales are st00pid. but your missing the point of mums, which is to annoy you until you say you'll never grown up to be like them, but to sow the seeds of doubt of how bad they where until you becomer exactly like them. we can all have dreams...and guns. oh well, back to the drudgery of evrydasy l.ife, until i get my next rittalin hit...then all will be well.

Hey Nat, this story is amazing. Well done. I thoroughly (or however u spell it) enjoyed it!! WELL DONE :) :D

Aw! I so Love this story! It is soo "fudging" funny. You know my friends often say that i have very little sanity. I just say that my siblings droped me on my head when i was little. Well they kind of did.

I luv it!! i really do! and i woz mentioned! Yea!LuvyaSianeyX