One minor error:

Line 9, really reality might be better.

Other than that... quite brilliant.

Rhyming scheme's good, and a good formatting style.

Great job, keep writting and pursuing your dreams.

aww your poem is totally relateable! i def. know how you feel and how you feel is very important. There was subtle rhyming in this, which i liked, because it flowed nicely! Thanks for your wonderful reviews, and i hope you continue writing!

Very nice...I can relate to this in a couple ways...well done!