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| Taolei 2006-04-18 ch 1,   | I love it, I love it. :D The way you write is very different which makes the poem fun to read. Though the messege of your poems do get lost in your use of rhyming sometimes. I think you could ease up and end up having your poems sound just as beautiful, if not more. Otherwise this is a very well written poem and I love it. :) |
| Katterree Fengari 2006-04-06 ch 1, | ...somehow this reminds me of South Park...Right...I kind of hope that isn't an actual rabbit......interesting poem... |
| Apathetically Angelic 2006-01-27 ch 1, | intriuging and mesmerizing... absolutely lovely |