Reviews for St Valentine's Sweethearts

merrymowmow 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseI was wondering when you're going to update.
Intrepid23 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abuseAwesome story filled with lots of suspense and mystery, addictive. But if you'll allow me to make one suggestion: if I remember correctly San Quentin is an American prison which means that Brent must also be American; his voice doesn't exactly sound American nor does it reflect his background- perhaps you should tone down the sophistication in the text and add a bit more slang to Brent's dialogue to create a more realistic feel to the story.
MOLLY90-05 2006-02-06 ch 1,	abuseAwesome story, very gripping..
Stefania-Liu 2006-01-27 ch 1,	abuseThis story is fascinating!! I'm already dying to know more about this asylum. Please add more! (and yes, I know that the document manager can be a bit frustrating. I tried several times to upload one of my poems, and now the format is all messed up)