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| Sita Fuoco 2006-01-27 ch 1,   | Extremely well written. I love the old style, mostly because in my English course we are discussing the Elizebethan era. I really enjoyed the emotion portrayed. Its extremely powerfully put, and it has extreme imagry that i adore. "...ill luck a welcome release from these gilded chains..." was certainly one of my favorites. Wonderful. Keep writing. ~Sita |
| Nicole Michele 2006-01-27 ch 1, | great imagery and emotion..good job |