This is crazy gorgeous stuff. The only place I think it hitches is in the moment off odd formatting - it really threw me off the groove of the whole thing. Good work. Creepy, extravagant and human. You've got some incredible language.

excellent. splendid! *nods* um. in case you didn't realize i suck at reviews, but know that when i say "excellent" and "splendid! *nods*" i mean that truly.

I like how you structure and format your ideas to go along with the story, creates a visual poem as well as what might tap at the ears...

L0vely. With an 0. It's kind of funny, because I could actually sort of follow in the front... and then it just kind of disintegrated between my fingers and I thought it was *good*. And confusing.

But I got the basic idea of it.

So, good spam! .x