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| Eloquently 2006-01-28 ch 1,  | abuseThis was really awesome. I can't even describe it, but I love the way you write. "...taste your salty tears and let them stain the holy floor." Was the coolest line in my opinion, and I really, really liked it. It sounded like a song lyric or something. Great job! |