wow, really impressive. I like your style and the plot is very interesting so far. Please update soon, will ya?

this is good. i hope you decide to finish it. would love to read more. -L

Interesting story. I quite like it.

But your author's note at the beginning of this chapter confused me a bit? Is this a misplaced fanfiction? Or was that just a slip on your part?

=) Mandraco.

Please, keep writing!