Aww! This was really cute =) I tried singing it (in my head of course) to the tune & it wasn't the same in some places. But its utter adorableness makes up for that!

I luv this poem, i think it's kinda kute. it's 2 bad U don't like writing poetry, you're really gud at it! pleez write moor!! :)

Bravo! I love spin-offs, they make you compare between the original and the unoriginal. This one was very well done, and I love the way you twisted the whole story. Good job.