If only if only... Why is there always a catch. I suppose Heaven isn't the only place wih open gates...

"Abandon all hope, yee who enter here."

oops... forgot to leave the reveiw... good thing i read everything i like few times every now and then _ GREAT POEM! this is so awesome _ i love this feeling.. and there's nothing like it. I know what you are trying to express... and it's awesome _ love you! Kevin

This is really beautiful. I've finally found a writer who wrote something about God! all my spiritual poems have gotten reviews like "i don't share your beliefs but good poem." This is very touching and i like the rhyme scheme. this sounds stupid, but it sounds like it could be made into a rap...yes i am insane. Good job

very inspiring. nicely done! just one little thing.. i think you should capitalize the He, His & Him's.. c: