Nice personifications and great flow of events. The words are insightful, and the last two lines add an element of humor.

Oh i love this! THe personnification is awesome, and you described everything so nicely. Great flow too, the whole theme/moral behind this poem makes you think. Great job, keep up the awesome work!

very creative. i like

This is one of the best poems I read in a few weeks. I love the way you described everything here and the ending was just fabulous. It was well-put indeed. Good for you! :D