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a silenced revolution 2008-02-11 . chapter 1
I like "Desiring memories of love". Not just desiring love, but wishing it had even just happened in the past. Nice.

I can't tell whether the first line is supposed to be the title or the beginning of the poem. It's better if it's the title because otherwise the repetition of the phrase weakens the poem.
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