 Banshee Junior 2007-01-06 . chapter 1This haiku trickles well, just like your waterfall. I've only recently learnt about and started consciously reading them, so I can't really resist one when I see it. Somehow the word 'water' just flows all too well with 'beautiful'! |
 ignominy 2006-11-02 . chapter 5i like sunshine and outside the best. their discriptive and have a nice beat. you seem to be a fan of haikus, huh? :) |
 yellow dalek 2006-10-10 . chapter 5N little things. Tey are all correct! (i went through counting the sylabbles. i'm really sad in that sort of way.)Will you put any more poems on?
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YElLoW DaLEK |
 Sakura Taking 2006-10-06 . chapter 1I am not the best at reviewing haikus...but these are well done. |
 classic violet 2006-10-01 . chapter 5vivid, nice. |
 SachiSachi 2006-09-30 . chapter 5Hooray for outside! :] |
 Leaving Here 2006-09-24 . chapter 5i wish i saw those things *sighs wistfully* |
 Leaving Here 2006-09-24 . chapter 4hmm...interesting |
 Leaving Here 2006-09-24 . chapter 3calming |
 Leaving Here 2006-09-24 . chapter 2can relate |
 Leaving Here 2006-09-24 . chapter 1awesome |
 Travis C. Eckert 2006-09-24 . chapter 1I guess you really like water. |
 simpleplan13 2006-08-23 . chapter 1slightly repetitive, but still well done |
 Abby Sequioa 2006-06-01 . chapter 4ok, sorry if I sound rude and all, but there was one review to this collection that I'd like to counter. This poet used the word beautiful only TWICE, in five poems. plus, these are amazing poems.just wanted to say that, sorry about the rudeness |
 Abby Sequioa 2006-06-01 . chapter 1so peaceful and serene... I love it!(I updated Highschool by the way, if you wanted to know)~keep writing |