What can I say that can rival the feelings the two of you share for each other? Yes, I fell in love with you...but this little (story? ficlette? essay?) has shown me that I obviously don't share the same depth of emotion the two of you have together. That's...disheartening, but I know better than to stop now. I love you, Neko, and I always will. I just...I'll just never have you to myself.

I lost that chance so long ago...

this is sweet, this is touching, this is also slightly creepy, seeing as its posted on the internet instead of in a journal or something of that sort. but you do write it wonderfully and even though its just your story, it captures that ... y'know ... feeling of being happy with someone. i was doubtful, but i do believe you've won me over.

Heh. I always say "I win." Not really sure where I picked it up, but go figure.

You Roald Dahl style writing made me stick around even though I'm trying desperately to finish my own story. Alas, I have to finish the rest later, but finish it I will.

I'm actually tearing up. I want to have that connection with someone. And I'm so happy that you found him, because you are worth that love, that devotion that I can feel humming in the air just from reading your beautiful words. He's your safety, and you're his to protect. Without that, both of you would loose something so precious that neither of you would ever fully heal. That scar would never fade. You time with him will help heal the wounds others have inflicted on your beautiful heart, just remember to beleive in him, and let him take your hand and lead you away from the darkness that threatened to swallow you once. You're so close to the light at the end, I can almost see it for you. You're his light just as much as he is yours. Never doubt that. And give him my regards. =)

Beautiful descriptions with wonderful diction and delighrful repetition. You pull in the reader by asking retorical questions and addressing him or her repeatedly. It gives off a nice feeling, like a friend telling you a story in front of a fire in winter. A long, epic tale that takes quite a while to get through. Thank you for sharing your safety with me, for just the thought of him makes me feel more secure as well.