I love your writing style. It flows so well, like poetry. Are these characters in your other story?

This was brilliant! I like the interspersing of tenses and the twists i.e. them being younger. Ecellent ending just watch out for missing words out but fab! Keep writing.

...wow... now that is romance, in the true sense of the word. (i hope you understand what i'm getting at)

That was so sad. It was very good though. Man your making me wanna cry! *starts cries*

Oh wow... that is sad and yet beautiful. Great job.

That's good. That's really good. It's so sad, too.