I think that the dove was a beautiful metaphor for death. I love this poem.

wow, i like how you used two different points-of-view to describe ugliness in beauty...hey! that would make a good poem name! ugliness in beauty!! haha!..sorree! getting sidetracked again!

I like it. Nice imagery.

k i dont think i got this poem before but now i think i understand. its nice, sorry i cant say much more, dont know the poetry lingo.

This was so sweet and inspirational, I really loved it. I absolutely loved these lines I felt like i was connected to you by them."As I buried it, I found that my hands

were fragile and cold.

And realized that I've suddenly

become so old."

The ending was sweet and wonderful, I loved this it is going on my favorites.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

very creative...hm the other reviewers are right it is very thought provoking...

is the black dove a symbol of the grim reaper?

Wow, that was def. different but very powerful! I especially loved the ending! Keep up the great work!

unique. i liked it.Tiffany

scary and deep. thought provoking.

M This writing you have penned... thot provokingly good