Oh my god thats good, it almost made me cry in all honesty. I know the feeling.

P.S. thanks for the review

Love Letty

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aw, man i know that feeling... well crafted poem, it's really good. nice one.

hey this is a really great poem. ur a good writer. how old r u?

Its understandable.

You have changed for the worst and your true self has abandoned you. that's what I understand from reading this poem.

It was really good and true about how we lose ourselves through the years.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

It's kind of sad, but I understand it. I like it, and I usually am not a big fan of free verse stuff.

I don't always love rhyming, but I thought that it worked beautifully with this. Phenomenal job :)

Wow, that was haunting and beautiful.

This is very well written. I liked the rhythem: it flowed very smoothly, like a song. Well done!

Oh...this is the one u were talking bout...I like it...ure right it is freaky and scary

It's like losing yourself and you can't have that old thing back...you know what I mean (it it doesn't well too bad it made sense in my head)

kinda confusing. but im stupid so i dont count. pretty good writing ;D

AW...so sad! I like how you twisted it to be your own reflection! Wonderful job!