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| Moondog Dozier 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseWonderful sound and tone throughout this work. The emotions come across well because they are not forced, they are presented in a realistic narrative. Good work. |
| SirScott 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this song. I like the line will you stop pulling my hair. Good line. Keep writing. SirScott |
| FunkyFlower17 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abusethis is terribly sad and touching. i cant say that i relate but sometimes i feel like this. to be honest, i dont think i've got a great sense of rhythm, so i'm not a perfect judge on songs, but this is really cool. i luv the adieu bit. bittersweet and extremely well written. keep writing, ~mez~ |