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Reviews For: Not how I like to Live

Moondog Dozier
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abuseWonderful sound and tone throughout this work. The emotions come across well because they are not forced, they are presented in a realistic narrative. Good work.
SirScott
2006-02-05
ch 1,
abuseI can relate to this song. I like the line will you stop pulling my hair. Good line. Keep writing. SirScott
FunkyFlower17
2006-02-04
ch 1,
abusethis is terribly sad and touching. i cant say that i relate but sometimes i feel like this. to be honest, i dont think i've got a great sense of rhythm, so i'm not a perfect judge on songs, but this is really cool. i luv the adieu bit. bittersweet and extremely well written. keep writing,

~mez~
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