I love this.. I was not expecting a happy ending at all and that last couple of lines were great.. beautifully done

good job Great imagery. I loved how you mixed fantasy with realism.

Aww this is so beautiful. Great work as always! Great ending, so strong. Well done! V x

WOW...that was really powerful and i loved it, everything was just written straight from the heart, well done!

Wauw, this is so beautiful. I love the way you write! _

Much love, Rosanna.

haunting, painful. looks you in the eye & tells you how it is.