Very good, awesome write.

Short yet heartfelt. Nicely written =)

Short and to the point. Yet, with each well placed word, a door to the speaker is opened. Well written.

short - you've cut back on the words and (maybe cause I'm a closet art student) by doing this, I think it reveals a primal energy that more people can relate to. Every line seems to summon forth a slightly different feeling. Then again, maybe I'm thinking too much... It's cute. For some reason, when I see your pen name: Teufel, it always makes me think of Tofu?

Bread.