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| wildwolffree17 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseCute. |
| Kuzuki Sugimorii 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseThat's cute. And it's a very good summation of most groups and friends. I've really got no complaints on this one. After all, simple is best. |
| Curiositie 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great similie.. Love it! |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-09-28 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. It also makes sense. A very good analogy. I must say though, I'm not a big fan of jelly-filled cookies and I haven't actually seen any in a few years. :) ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for the review on "I Walk Under the Moon to Remember." Glad you liked it and yes, it is depressing, but I wrote it for such a strong emotion. |
| aaidenkae 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abusereally pretty. and so true! i really liked this!-kae |
| Lyn Kinsei 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI liked. I read it to my friend, and she said fascinating.♥Aimee and Isis( |
| scriblets1an2 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was great I love how u used a everday item to describe a friendship. |
| brokendreams21 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseInteresting comparison between cookies and friendship. Are there really such things as jelly-filled cookies? (Where have I been? I don't know) Something so simple, yet so full of meaning. Great job! |
| felicia13 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThat's so cool! May I inquire as to who your friend is? I like the symbolism. Cookies are nice, as is friendship. Keep up the good work, and enjoy a jelly-filled cookie from me! =D all my love,felicia |