"smooth glide of blues down my backbone" I really like this line. I need to get me some of that. This was lovely. Have you considered publishing some of your work? You really should. There are a lot of literary journals in Canada.

This is a likeable piece - only half serious, with a nice musical feel to it.

I like it; it’s a bit ruff around the edges but its good. The middle and the end are a bit standoffish but the middle about the birthday party really crystallizes and flows beautifully; like a movie almost. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.