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| Auster2 2006-01-29 ch 1,   | dark, very dark but some of your words are truly perfect. "The sun can run its course,And the days can pass me by." Ireally liked that. |
| briannathewriter 2006-01-29 ch 1, | In a twisted way, this poem makes me want to laugh a little. But I do know bipoalr is no laughing matter and I am very serious when I say this was a good poem. It seems to tell a story, not emotion, which is different, but good. |
| Espantalho 2006-01-29 ch 1, | Oo, this is very, very impressive! Way to go! |