oh, interesting! a bit odd and hard to understand the first time through, but nice imagery and rhythm. I liked it!

Keep writing.

-L-

P.S. Thanks for the review!

REally awesome, as always! What's the point of the parenthesis, though?

Um...oh, and this sounds familiar somehow...have you written something like this before? ...hm...

Oh, well!

Blessed be!

O.O that was awesome. It reminds me of Incubus lyrics. LOVE YOUR STYLE ^_^ love love love it!!

I must have dropped because my head is spinning with the dazzling bursts of words here. No need to comment...this is great.

I remember this... lol. As always, wonderful imagery. And, yes, if you didn't already guess, I'm catching up on all of the reading I missed! (let me know if I missed something you updated!)

pretty cool. luv the imagery and nicely put together. great job!

~mez~