This speaks to me. Deeply.

Sometimes being different is all you got. There's something lovely about this poem.

EB

This has nothing to do with your poem, but just thought to say your comments are really amusing. You hit where it stings. I must learn from you!

I especially love the lines following "She is not like he is." And astounding and impressionistic poem.

i love this. im not sure what makes it so compelling, but something does. and, oddly enough, it makes sense to me. nonsensical words that speak straight to my heart. thanks.

Wow, the imagery in this is so amazing, it's kind of trippy, especially the sun/drop of caramel thing there...and seeing the sound of aluminum foil...cool.

ROCK!

...and I actually understood it, YAY!

Blessed be!

Still loving your style, keep the good stuff coming!

Hmm, I'm liking the originality, and the alternative view you have. Being different automatically makes you worth reviewing. Great job!

Well, I'm too tired and over-worked to make sense of it - so it made me laugh. Don't ask.

Actually, it made me think of a love triangle or something... hmm.

I like it. I truly do. I seem to like all your poems I have read so far. I mean it. This is a good one, and it has nice writing style. Keep up the good work!Peace and cookiesSica~

um...i found this a little confusing. not the bit about butterfiles...i actually loved that, but the way u said 'she' then 'he' then 'i'. i suppose ur talking about several different people. anyway, awesome ending. keep writing,

~mez~