i liked the last stanza. nice.

I love this. It's somehow very touching. The last stanza seems slightly awkward, was it meant to be that way?

the "adonis" line just had me in absolute love for this piece. oh, and the first line ofcourse. it is just so beautiful, put into perfect words and just breathtakingly poignant. lovelovelove.

~* noelle

hm... this time i KNOW it's just me so... lol, I can't say it didn't mean anything cuz i didn't really get it... but I'm guessing that if I did, then there would be wonderfully vivid images there =).

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