nice

luv ur story so far, and kyla is just the most adorable character i've come across, so keep updating!

Ah! update update update! :D

Hi ! I don't remember if i already left a review but since it's the second time i read your story, i thought that anyway it was worth saying, even a second time, that i enjoy your story. I even find more enjoyment in the second reading, though now i'm even more impatient for the next chapter. I'll be waiting ^^

Your story or novel is so awesome I abslutley loved it. I like how Kyla has character flaws and isn't like your normal princess because she chose to go with the theif in rags instead of a pompous bigheaded knight in shining armour. I mean really what is their deal with shining armour? Anyway, I like that they finally admiited they have feelings for eachother. Ayden is awesome I like how he curses alot and is sarcastic. Anyway Bye

So officially I LOVE THIS STORY! This chapter was really good, I love the fact that Aden gets jealous of Kyla. Plus it helps that she finds his jealousy amusing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh and it seems as though Aden truly does love her, and yes I think he has finally found his 'soulmate'. I'll be waiting for the next update :)
-DarK-FreEdoM

It took me a while to realize that I didn't review this chapter. Drats. I wonder where my brain went. Sigh. Anyway...even though you guys haven't updated for a REALLY long time (where are you?!) I still have to comment that this is really a good story. The action is finally GETTING THERE, what, with Aden and Kyla getting captured and then Macyn going in to save them because he owes Aden a life. Man ;) It's getting good, and please don't stop updating! It's been a while since I've checked, and now I'm like dammit...they STILL haven't updated. It's not that I'm purposely rushing you guys or anything, because I know how busy some people can get, and yeah, I've been pretty busy lately as well. Just try your best, okie? :) Thanks. Love you guys!

she is really gettin on my nerves. I wish aden pushes her out of bred or something.He shouldn't blame himself for getting into sitiation because she came back.And can they go threw a period(2 chapt) of when he doesn't loss tghe fights.And i just really don't like her. she is a annoying idiot and i feel bad for aden. him i love (i know it sounds mean but i really know some people like her and nothing bad ever happens to them...they get all the luck :( ) ad he is so hot. UPDATE :)

Hahaha, you think about such sensible things. I love it.

I adored this paragraph: "The leaves in the trees rustled gently in a slight breeze. An owl called out to the night. Crickets chirped. Fallen leaves shifted to either side as a snake slithered by. No evidence of human life." So beautifully written. Very atmospheric.

No Kyla No!!

Yes Macyn!

"“Aww…” **, I didn’t realize women actually did that!" HAhahahahahaha of course we do!!

Very nice chapter. I love your writing style, characters, story, everything. It's all lovely.

Feels like this is sort of drawing towards a close, but I feel as though you probably have something else up your sleeves...

Keep writing!

Good so far. One thing though, for the most part thieves need to be plain looking, average so not to draw attention and be worth remmebering. If he is anywhere near "dashing" it would've been hard for him not to have been caught before now.

I seriously hope that Kyla isn't as dim-witted as she seems. It would be great if its all an act because you did say in your summary appearances are discieving. (can't spell)

Seeing as it's midnight, I've slept a grand total of 7 hours in the past two days, and I'm currently on a sugar high, I think I'm just going to say that my reaction is the same as last chapter...More squeals and giggles and coos and aws...And a bit of teary eyedness at how sweet he's becoming...And jealous...Which is quite funny really...Watching boys get jealous I mean...

awhe is soo cute!(and indenial but we'll look past that)

aw this story so so unbelively cute cool and a little disgusting but mostly cool and cute! I peronaly like Macyn crumby messed up shop even though its sruffy. I liek the stables boys ha ha very original.

True Calling. Update soon! please! this isnt the end right?...

good chapter indeed. I like Kyla's boys; they are quite funny. This story has been consistently providing me with an upper level reading experience that is also even FUN to read. Keep up the good work. We may have learned early on where aden got his leg injury, but I could not find it again. Are we supposed to know that or is it going to go into the plot later?

*scream* Aw! I loved that chapter! Yay! The boys are back! I love the boys, they're funny. How many chapters are left? I don't want this great story to end! Love you guys!-Avey