i love the repetition and the way you completely capture the moment.

[& i wanted to say that while i very much appreciate your review and take it to heart, that poem wasn't really meant to be anything but crude & if you find that that disturbs you than don't bother reading it. because that's my life in a poem, & i'm keeping it that way.]

This place sounds very nice. I like it...if only we could find a place like this. Great work!

Aww! Love! And the way it's typed is very cool.

v nicely written. Again, lovely imaginary.

Nicely done, yet...dreams are only a figment of our imaginations, yet if they could be real... Joe Asher

I love it! it flows really nicely and takes me out of my self ( if that makes any sense at all) lol but anyway. Keep it going!

^_^ Beautiful imagery! It puts me on the beaches of Fiji or Australia. Absolutely beautiful!!

I love the ocean... I wouldn't want to leave either. I can hear the seagull and see the children playing.

Thanks for reviewing Windsong. Sorry so long in replying - just found the email about your review (lots and lots of emails in my inbox). How did you find my poem, by the way?? ^..^

O, I like this imagery... makes me miss the beach, even though I know when I get there I just want to leave again. Good poem with strong imagery.

~Leeona Trance

Aw, pretty!

It seems like a beautiful place. The way you described it made me want to be anywhere but here in the middle of another cold winter. :-) Very interesting format. I really like the way the poem as a whole looks when you read it...

Great job! Keep writing! :-)

P.S. Thank you for your nice review!

Good imagery and description. I used to live in Florida- just a few minutes from the beach. It is nice, usually. Really, great job! I like it.

the imagery is amazing. Tiffany

great rhyme, good description, and interesting poem

Hm...interesting. the emphasis on certain words has an intriging effect. your dream world comes to life before us and its quite vivid.