Well hello MorganTW! I just remembered I've had this story in my favorites for a few years and I decided to tell you that I miss it so much I'm gonna reread it. I am astonished to see you haven't written anything since. Hope to see you writing more someday soon. You have quite the talent.

Hawkeye329

Quite interesting, I am liking where this is going

Wow, so, I haven't read this in a long time. And now it's finished! It seems as if we did the same thing to each other. Except I was just not paying attention. >_

WHY??!! Why the hell do you want to cut it off right there??!! ARRGGHH!! Anyway.. when are you going to update again??!! I really wanna know what happenes bnext!! I hope it's soon!!

...AH!You had to end it there?Can't wait for the next story!

whoa...that was really thrilling...more more more!

Why did you have to end this story on my birthday? This is torture. I love this...it is excellent, fantastic, brilliant, superb...actually I could keep going but I'll stop now. I can't wait to read Saviour.

S.S. Dailey

Interesting chapter but OMG! You shouldn't have left it there *cries*.. Can't wait for the next story to see what happens with the immortals and what Evan does when he finds out about Malcolm and Emmanuelle... If he finds out...

Excellent...now we're getting into the action. I LOVE THIS STORY. I love Emmanuelle. And I love Malcolm (even though I still don't really know why). I want to read more. Please, please, please update soon. Oh, and I liked that little bit about Laken being Emma and Sin's brother.

S.S. Dailey

OMG!! This is amazing. I guess it's a very good thing Emmanuelle wasn't in love with Laken. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, I've been at my dad's house. This is so amazing. You're stories are so unpredictable. Great job!

Eek!

Just read the past few chapters and omg!

Awesome :)

Hey.. I'm back.. anyway.. EXCELLENT chapters!! Why did you have to leave it there?? I really wanna read the whole story SOON!! How are they going to kick Asmara's powerful butt?? And all those water crashing down onto Emmanuele (I didn't spell it wrongly, did I?? Hah...).. Anyway.. you are really good!!

Oh...I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope Malcolm's not permanently hurt because of Emmanuelle draining power from him. I'm really starting to like Malcolm now, even though I don't like that he's siding with Virtue. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon. I can't believe this story is almost over!

S.S. Dailey

You like me hyper? Well, I'm hyper all the time. Most of the time though I can control myself, especially when I'm writing a review. If you want, I can try to be more sporadic and hyper in my reviews but no guarantees. I'm so glad that Emmanuelle and Malcolm have finally hooked up. I actually am excited about that (something I couldn't say at the beginning of the story when I hated Malcolm's guts) Anyway, great job.

S.S. Dailey

A very intriguing story so far. The characters are nicely developed, though they seem a tad two-dimensional in these early chapters since so little is divulged about them, but, then again, development takes time. I like the whole air of mystery set up here surrounded the Wise Ones and the meeting; it really draws the reader in and makes them eager to read on. Very nice.

Other than some punctuation errors, run-on sentences, and a few other grammatical errors, the story's well written.

I hope to catch up on the rest of this story soon. I'm afraid I tend to preoccupy my time with other things. And I hope what comments I gave can be helpful to you.