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| Auster2 2006-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseI am perpelexed, for i know i love this poem, but what i fear is the message because it seems distant. Your poem is almost how to say, well distant. I loved it, no matter, and like how you started every stanaza. Amazing. |
| Politically Incorrect Lamb 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseUnfortunately the truth does not ring heavily in the ears of the ignorant. This is packed with feeling...all your words always are. Thats why they are so...for lack of a better and less lame word, precious to me. |
| darkdesperation 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI like this alot... like this part "She can make room for you between her legs, not the chambers of her heart" Very very nice... I like this poem alot.. I feel this way about some people I know. |