So it sorta sounded like Lynne Ewing's series Daughters of the moon. Is that what its based off of?

Its an okay story. I would develop your characters a little more and work on the dialogue. I hope to see how the plot comes aling. I also would like to comment on the lack of action scenes. Not action scenes as in fighting. I mean like less dialogue more actions.
I hope you update soon!

Interesting.

*sigh* just 'reviewing' cuz I'm bored...

Inda. teehee. *pokes* do I get a cameo? *puppy eyes*

Sorry for not reviewing in a while. Uhm, I think I like this sister best. So far. Wait, would you classify them as sisters? Now that they are very different. Well, he plot line's moving nicely. Visions. Fun.

Good story, although you might want to read through it for spelling errors but it looks good so far, looking forward to more :)

SEE! SEE! I finally read it! I told you I would! Bwahahaha!!*ahem* anyway...I like it! I think it's gonna be easy to build on, and I like Sophia. Could anyone possibly be based off of people...? hm? *winkwinknudgenudge*

Hmm - numba 2 ish Lilia. And Keli is Kellie. But where am I? Put me in or I'll eat your soul.

Number one: congrats, you've got an interesting story. I hope you update soon. Number two: I think you need longer chappies, that way I don't have to quit reading so soon. Number three: I think the word you were looking for is spelled posse, not posy. Oh, and number four, thanks for not being one of those people who go "He said this then she said that then he said this and she said that and they both at the same time in unison said whatever and he laughed and she smiled and he said something and she said..." You get the picture, right?

I didn't know you knew spanish or latin... yo tengo un poco espanol tambien.

when you sat posy, do you mean posse?abd you spelled customer wrong... like costumer as in one who wears costumes

there's som grammarish stuff for you i really liked it though

me like alec.

Hey, great story, keep it up, love it. -Moonlight Writer