Reviews for A Rainy Day, a Cute Boy and a Funeral

SamanthaNicole 2007-11-01 ch 1,	abuseThis was a really interesting oneshot. I find myself hoping you'll turn it into something more, because I really want to find out where the boy went, and what could have become of the two of them. I'm not necessarily sure if you need all the f-words, but then again, I don't have a problem with it, and you can write however you want. It's your story, after all. And a good one, at that. One thing: It was an ** funeral. --> 'an' should be 'a.' You do it again in the following sentence. Other than that, good job. I hope you consider adding onto this. Cheers, Sammy
twdbot 2006-01-29 ch 1,	abuse/thumbs up Fascinating idea. I think this story'll turn out awesome. Nice summary, by the way.
squiggle-line 2006-01-29 ch 1,	abuse"[a] ** funeral"? "I am not one of [those] girls"? Interesting. Is this a one-shot?
escrita 2006-01-29 ch 1,	abuseGood idea for a short story, but I'm not sure what all the cursing is about (not that it bothers me.) Good idea.