You writing skills are amazing. You say things in the simplest ways and make seem so deep. Kudos!

Very nice, I like the simplistic, yet effective metaphor.

aw. very intense. beautiful and so sad too.

even though your poem doesnt have a rhyme scheme you put it together well...it had good rythem and a good flow of words...i love the concept and it was a really good poem...

jess~love is like the wind, i cant see it but i can feel it~