Reviews for West Coast Love - FictionPress.com

Benjamin - To Be Deleted 2006-04-09 ch 1,	abuseNice... nery nice. Although, I think you combine " and / for heaven's sake" into one line. Aside from that, great poem.
leylakedi 2006-03-26 ch 1,	abuseyay cali pride!! (well, i'm assuming your in california because of the summary, BUT I could be wrong...) lol, I totally relate to this poem. -L-
ii 2006-02-03 ch 1,	abuseI like the rhyme and the rhythm. Good beginning and good end. It's a nice poem. :-) There are two little things I would change. I think "anyday" should be "any day". At least my dictionary says so. And I would combine "and / for heaven's sake" into one line, unless that's for a particular effect that you wanted. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. I like your style.