Oh man...that made me sad... But I guess that's a good thing, if a poem can invoke emotion, huh?

I know this feeling all too well. I liked the 'paper cut kiss' lines, but my favorite part of this poem was the last line. Went so well with the title. Wonderful work.

Peace, Daze

P.S. Since I seem to be a fan of all your writing so far, I'll be adding you to my favorites list. Hope you don't mind.

this is so good, you are a great writer...

I love this. You are an amazing writer, I just thought I'd tell you that.

Interesting way to put things. I like it kinda ...yeah.

aw thats so sad. know the feeling though

This is very descriptive. I really liked this: "paper cut kiss me". Well done.

really interesting piece...I sort of get the feeling of looking back with nostalgia and getting a feeling of happiness-sadness. Maybe this is about growing up, moving on? Looking forward. I like it.

Chills, Naomi! CHILLS! The "paper cut kisses" leaves a really really good image in the mind. good job!

I LOVE THIS"paper cut kiss me"its so sweetumsing me the tune.MWA

Beautiful is the only word I need to use to sufficiently describe this poem.