| Reviews for Fake Smiles |
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Brennaka 10/21/09 . chapter 1I've never been a fan of poetry, but this is fantastic and easy to relate to. You did an amazing job. |
WEAK 6/20/08 . chapter 1Smile. Powerful. |
socks-lost 8/24/07 . chapter 1wow! Really good you can feel the emotion in it. I found myself sadly noding while reading, theres not much i can relate to but i could to that and think many other people will be able to. great job keep it up |
Lily Laurence 6/28/07 . chapter 1Wow, really beautiful. and sadly true. |
The Wandering Musician 2/14/07 . chapter 1This is a great poem and I think you have a lot of potential. The feeling and emotion in this was great. I suggest not using couplets when you right. Take the first for lines, for example; you could switch them up and they still make sense: "No matter what they do/ Don't believe anything they say./ Don't allow emotions through/ THey don't care about you anyway." It makes it feel a bit more mature and it doesn't change the meaning or feeling of the poem. Please keep writing because this was great! Daughter of the Faeries |
promisesarelies 4/14/06 . chapter 1wow. this is amazingly accurate. i can relate. this was a great poem! |
seasick 3/18/06 . chapter 1I feel a strong and strange connection to this piece and you. It seems like i was meant to read this poem it made me cry. And i don't cry. i smile. so thank you i guess for making me cry. |