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Cynical Syndrome
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseSmile.
Powerful.
soccerfreak18
2007-08-24
ch 1,
abusewow! Really good you can feel the emotion in it. I found myself sadly noding while reading, theres not much i can relate to but i could to that and think many other people will be able to. great job keep it up
Lily Laurence
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, really beautiful. and sadly true.
Daughter of the Faeries
2007-02-14
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great poem and I think you have a lot of potential. The feeling and emotion in this was great. I suggest not using couplets when you right. Take the first for lines, for example; you could switch them up and they still make sense: "No matter what they do/ Don't believe anything they say./ Don't allow emotions through/ THey don't care about you anyway." It makes it feel a bit more mature and it doesn't change the meaning or feeling of the poem. Please keep writing because this was great!
~Daughter of the Faeries
promisesarelies
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abusewow. this is amazingly accurate. i can relate. this was a great poem!
seasick
2006-03-18
ch 1,
abuseI feel a strong and strange connection to this piece and you. It seems like i was meant to read this poem it made me cry. And i don't cry. i smile. so thank you i guess for making me cry.
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