obviously you are a very good writer i think that you would really like my friend autumn berrington she has really good poems based on her life and stuff u should read them even if u r reading the review please read and review mine

Hi Nick,your poems are great especially this one. The first one in which I can indulge myself and get the feeling that there is someone else who feels this as well.By the way, anything by you published out in the stores?Looking forward to more of your works. Keep on going, you do have a sense with words.

I love the ocean theme--it adds to the feeling of vast loneliness, and fits in very nicely, forming a more emotional image in the reader's mind. Well done, as always.

Wow, this was such an awesome poem!! I love the analogy between love and the ocean. Like how the sea floods and the loneliness is in the depths of the emotional sea. ::adds to favs:: Great job! Oh yah, and it was nice chatting with you before. :)