I had a special somebody once and when I found out that they did not know my name, it broke my heart. This has a sad beauty to it.

EB

This is beautiful. Your work is so raw and blunt. It's absolutely wonderful.

burn her deeper then ever before...thanshe breaths in, out, in, out...breathes

wow powerful piece.. sad ending though, but beautifuly done

inhuman(itarian).

I love that word.

The last stanza makes the "you" person seem sadistic until the last line, then you realize they enjoy breaking hearts because it hurts them too.

At least that's the interpretation I got from it.

Woah... spectacualr poem. Original and beautiful, I love it.

hey, sorry i haven't checked in on a long time. but i'm glad i did. i still love the way you write your poetry. it's unique, and you always manage to convey your message across regardless of how it seems at first glance like a jumbled mix of emotions and thoughts. i envy you for that. this one is no exception. great job here.

Spectacular. You really amaze me ^.^

~Shavo~

ya know, after reading some of your poems (for-i-can't-read-all-in-one-seating-for-they're-many-but-i'll-be-back-for-sure-to-read-the-others), i reallyreally want you in my faves list. for you are a good writer, real good. i like the uniqueness that you incorporate in your writings. i like daring writers, writers who walk away from the conventional. for we write to express ourselves; are we all too uniformed, all too formal to fit our thoughts into a mold, a mold that has been overly used by the olden writers? we are humans, what we write should be human too. am i making sense? i don't think so. nyah.

anywho, what i like in this poem is the last stanza.

I like :) it's harsh and bittersweet and it's so enchanting because in every single one of your poems there's such a story...takes me breath away ;)! Love, Mia

beautiful, especially the last line.

this is beautiful..i especially love the last stanza: you like to trample fresh hearts etc..

the word masochist always makes me happy (i just like the way it sounds)..but it makes for a nice ending to the poem

xoxocasey

This poem's quite stark! Not quite prose, not quite a poem, but it seems like a recipe for unchartered sort of "routine" of things. The way this is written does make it stand out. In the least, you do show how someone would profess doubts about their love or their own psyche.

Well, maybe, it's all relative.

Your review was very helpful :)

Tx,

K

Wow, this is so beautiful, I wish I could write pieces as well as you! Your poems are so beautiful, excellent work!

uhg sometimes i want to rip my hair out cause i cant express how lovely your poems are. muahh.

--Naomi

loves

Beautiful, as always. I love the portrayed emotions in this, and the morbid colours that flash everywhere. Excellent.