Oh, wow. That was... it was something, but I can't seem to think of the words. It was one of those things that makes you think, "wow: that could be me." Or, "I wish I could've been there, so I could've done something." I could really identify with the story, especially the cafeteria part. I've had people throw things at me before, but never something like ketchup. Usually just paper, or french fries. Anyway, it was brilliant. Thanks!

Beautiful, it really began to show what gays/lesbians go through. Keep it up.

Wow, very origional and creative. Written from the point of an emo/goth. Nice.