Aw. Cute story. I really enjoyed it!

i've read this story several times over and over, and it remains by far, my favorite [unpublished] story. I love how you showed how the two really, truly love each other...I love a lot of your stories. Please keep writing, you have incredible talent!

Super adorable
Dean and jesse i love those especially because Those are the names of hot guys on gilmore girls.
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kinda expected more from this..cuz ur such a good writer..all your other stories are awesome...still okay though

i hope there is a sequal to this. =)

he took that a little too camly in my opinion.

i love the "he had that look of 'touch-what-is-mine-and-I'll-kill-you-with-my-bare-hands' part. that was great

that is a nice view about death and family.

that was a really nice chapter. I'm so glad that they get along now.

great chapter with the kids and the nightmares, and everything.

fun. Go fish! i love that game and the other side of Darla.

this chapter was WAY too short! but it was good.

I love your beginning. I can't wait to read more of your story.

cool story..i love the fantasy world and was sad when i reached ch9 coz i thought it was stopping when i noticed its actually completed. stupid me =P Overall a nice lighthearted read, though i felt like i was hearing their story from a distance- it might be a little too descriptive.

i luved ur story and jacen is the sweetest character i read bout so far so keep up the gud work!