 rockjam 2008-07-22 . chapter 9Aw. Cute story. I really enjoyed it! |
 striped-all-over 2008-06-18 . chapter 9i've read this story several times over and over, and it remains by far, my favorite [unpublished] story. I love how you showed how the two really, truly love each other...I love a lot of your stories. Please keep writing, you have incredible talent! |
 Yellers 2007-12-02 . chapter 9Super adorable
Dean and jesse i love those especially because Those are the names of hot guys on gilmore girls.
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 ophelia 2007-11-27 . chapter 1 kinda expected more from this..cuz ur such a good writer..all your other stories are awesome...still okay though |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 9i hope there is a sequal to this. =) |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 8he took that a little too camly in my opinion. |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 7i love the "he had that look of 'touch-what-is-mine-and-I'll-kill-you-with-my-bare-hands' part. that was great |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 6that is a nice view about death and family. |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 5that was a really nice chapter. I'm so glad that they get along now. |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 4great chapter with the kids and the nightmares, and everything. |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 3fun. Go fish! i love that game and the other side of Darla. |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 2this chapter was WAY too short! but it was good. |
 Katherine-the-greate 2007-11-18 . chapter 1I love your beginning. I can't wait to read more of your story. |
 Evenstar1389 2007-08-05 . chapter 9cool story..i love the fantasy world and was sad when i reached ch9 coz i thought it was stopping when i noticed its actually completed. stupid me =P Overall a nice lighthearted read, though i felt like i was hearing their story from a distance- it might be a little too descriptive. |
 SapphireEyes16 2007-06-27 . chapter 9i luved ur story and jacen is the sweetest character i read bout so far so keep up the gud work! |