aw i like it! really, it's very good and expressed nicely. keep writing! (and it gives my friend sitting hopelessly beside me... her: it gives me a shiney bright light in my darkest hours... *looks up* it blinds me. ah! my eyes i'm blinded!

ok... yeah don't listen to her... her opinion doesn't matter ^-^

I realised that the first and second stanza of your poem portrayed two different things altogether, it's like the second stanza gave you a whole new ray of hope whereas the first one just let you down. Interesting, really interesting. Your poems are just stunning. :)

wow, very impressing

I really like the first stanza, its kind of like me, I just can't wait to get to heaven (but i can wait a little).

It's always nice to read something so... hopeful. =)

I absolutely adore the last two lines! I adore the poem altogether! ^_^ Excellent work, write on!

~Anna~