You are a great poet. You can fabricate stories and string feelings til they entwine and mesh into an intricate piece. This one is no exception. You make me look like a novice... (Oh wait...I am hehe) Going to Favs... Oh yeah. Continue writting, I look forward for your next update.

Ok... this poem was like (wow) really good..'This game that you put me throughTook all the best of me'That was great, but I liked the part of 'Seductive embrace'That was awesome... Keep it Up! hope to see more

Nicely written, well done! *applaudes*, I like it! Write on!

~Anna~