I really like the bitterness in this poem, and the way it all changes at the end. Unfortunatly, its so true as well. Nice Work

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I love the way that you wrote this! Great Job! ~xoxo~

It's really great... i love how you change from one mood to another and stuff... ya... nice poem

I can really relate to this. I love how you ended it abruptly and bold, great stuff