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boredshitless 2008-01-29 ch 33,	hey, that was a great read, i tried staying up to read it last night but got told off to go to sleep=) you should make more of this couple, im in love with Luke (hehe, isnt everyone?) i love sequels, though i wouldnt have a clue on what it will be like if you do end up writing one
Eve O'et 2007-09-23 ch 33,	okay...why do I always cry? I cried!You made me cry!that was so amazing!I couldn't stop reading!honestly...that was amazing, thank you!This deserves to be published you know. Wha!I loved it so much!
Kathleen Moon 2007-07-24 ch 33,	I absolutely loved it...fantastic story...great job!!
JamieBell 2007-05-22 ch 33,	Man, this has been a good day on this website. I've read around three pretty darn fun-tastic stories. This one included. Avery and Luke were such an odd pair, but definitely lovable. And Oliver--aw...so cute. It was a pleasure to read! Thanks for sharing.
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-05-22 ch 33,	AAH!! runs through the house screaming this was an AMAZING ending. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! I absoulutely loved it!! GREAT JOB!
Elle Winters 9 2007-05-22 ch 4,	I just don't get why she dumped the coke on ehr freidn..
youpin 2007-05-21 ch 6,	I really am enjoying this story.
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-05-11 ch 32,	Aww, I can't believe there is only one more chapter left. This chapter was great! I really enjoyed it!
sugarush7z 2007-05-06 ch 31,	I seriously love your stories! The young adult romance ones I mean. I love this one so much! It so good. I just found it today after reading all that was of the Allie and Troy story so far and saw this and was like 'what the heck? I'll read this too'. So yeah, really really good! Keep it up and update soon! This and the Allie and Troy one! :)
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-04-27 ch 31,	AW! I was all like, "YAY! THEY KISSED!" but NO, they just HAD to have more drama. great chapter!
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-04-13 ch 30,	Haha. Cute chapter!! I wonder what Luke meant... oh well. update soon!
Cass Boothe 2007-03-25 ch 29,	I really like how you're handling this story. It doesn't feel unrealistically cliche, like some of this genre tend to lean towards.
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-03-25 ch 29,	AACk. I must start this review in the middle, go back to the top, and then read the rest of the chapter, so it's going to be jumbled. "“You’d go well,” I said nodding. “She loves to write.” What am I saying? You’d go well??!" Aw. I love how you included Luke's thoughts there. they're so cute!! "I chuckled under my breath but let them off the hook. I had other concerns anyway. “So uh…have you guys seen—where’s uh…” I shrugged meaningfully looking at them." Haha. That was a cute line. "When I heard that, I had to comment. “You’re tented up with Andy? Wow, good luck, man!”" I definitely don't get it. What's wrong with Andy? "I like how your eyes sparkle whenever they meet mine. I like the way you laugh. I like the intensity in your eyes whenever you’re ** off at me—and what I noticed about you was that…what I realized…is that you’re the one thing I’m afraid of. Everything about you scares me dumb. " AW! That is SO SWEET! I Love it! "Joshua shot me a look. “Let’s sulk,” he suggested.'" HAHA! That's funny. I like how Joshua noticed how Luke feels about Avery though. Interesting how you included another curveball for Luke and Avery. Let's hope this one doesn't end up being a sleazeball. "“What can I say? We have a couple things in common,” I shrugged dryly." hahah. aww! AWW! That is so sweet of Luke! The poor guy!! GREAT CHAPTER I loved it!!
fuzieducky 2007-03-22 ch 28,	Really great story! Can't wait for the next chapter! The only thing I'm skeptical about is why Avery seems so...bipolar almnost. Is that supposed to be a secret that you reveal later, or was it just how it came out in your writing? Well, anyways, as I said, hope you have time to post another one real soon!
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-03-02 ch 28,	Aww! New guy! Interesting!! Hmm, wonder what happened to Luke? Great chapter!

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