Girls and horses is creepy.

Fan-**-tastic.

Wow. I couldn't just leave seperate reviews for every chapter of this poem because it felt like it was supposed to go together. This is gorgeous. A lovely and blindingly honest story.

Amazing.

You're wonderful.

wow, this is so amazing. Love the last part especcially. Love the reference to Romeo and Juliet. This is so awesome. I love the way its written. Nice work!

That was interesting. Kind of nice, actually!Aimee

i love this, i love the idea of telling a story and making it poetic because that's what i love about language...how it sounds. this is wonderful.

I wasn't so sure at first especially with refering them as girl#1, girl#2 and girl #3. But you really breathed life into them especially in the last three chapters. You made them three dimensional all with their own broken stories and that was what made it so compelling. Keep writing

This whole series ties together so well. I like the seperation of the work. The descriptions of the individuals in their own seperate stanza's works wonderfully to give the reader the back story of the situation that isn't readily available in some works. Giving this depth of character makes the characters more relatable to the reader and therefore we are able to gauge their actions and reactions from some point of knowledge. The scene created, as well as the interactions make this an excellent work. I really like the way that you divided it up, it worked well in developing the story and the scene.

i liked the way you did this, telling a story and making it poetic. i liked how you said 'girl # 1' etc. nice work. well done.

heh, i love this. : ) you have to continue.

I liked that you didn't give them names, think it worked really well. Made them into stereotypes more than people in my eyes, which was really interesting. Slightly different to your usual, the flow seems slower and more thoughtful. Like it a lot :)

such an interesting sequence of poems. Snapshots that are all seperate and connected and bring to mind a million girl #1s in my own life.

Aww... girl #1.. too impractical to make honour roll.. acting like she's tainted, even though she's never kissed a guy.. I like her and her "amour fou".. although the ending is sad (is it the end? I guess it would be because of the title..) anyway, I like this whole thing, it's lovely. =)

Poignant and intrigueing.

i liked the narration in this...great!

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