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| frayedlifeforce 2006-02-10 ch 1,  | abusethis is so beautiful. i loved the first line - really got the poem moving and the line: 'Even facsimiles weep.' was just amazing. the whole idea was creative. nice work and keep it up. |
| greenday-luver 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abusewow, really good |
| Donut prayer 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuse'even facsimiles weep' that's just so haunting, it's scary |
| lain 2006-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg it freaking too me forever to review!...like 15mins...it kept saying server busy. rawr. ne who, I liked it *_* you used a metaphor, right? I think...I liked it ^^ good job |
| Voice of a Pen 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseGood job i dont have much to say for some reason anyways good work |