i think he's the most adorable thing ever! hahaha nice cliffhanger! i loved it! laughed my little ** off!

I am really, really, really enjoying this story. I am quite sad that there are no more chapters. I hope that you update soon-- even more now that you left it off at such an important part. (A bit of a cliff hanger, I must admit.)

Your writing style is fabulous-- I am quite jealous. I love all of Kielan's perspective, as most times romance stories are written purely from the girl's view. There are very rarely grammatical errors or wierdly formed sentances that make it difficult to read, which is more than I can say for my own writing. :P

Keep it up, and update soon!

Keilan is definitely more than a cute lil crumpet! He's like a **' twelve tier birthday cake!

Oh no, they are caught, haha. I guess it wouldn't be a Kielan story if something didn't go wrong. I don't think this chapter was badly written it was actually funny and cute. I second in thinking that Kielan is just the cutest lil crumpet? Haha. Thanks for updating.

Hey! I really, really like your story and the way you portray your characters! Kielan is so fascinating, in my opinion. Sometimes, you want to hug him and at other times, you just want to hit him because he's acting really stupid, but it's okay, 'cause that makes us believe he could be a real person, and not only a 2D, cliché guy or anything. Are you updating that story anytime soon? I can't wait to read the next chapters!

ok i just needed to add this to my favorites list.. haha

Well, isn't that adorable. (My apologies, I'm not that into romances but I do like this one. The summary caught me and so did the story. Plus, I'm tired.) I like Kielan. Mr. Mysterious, love that type. It's really good, I like your imagery, some of it's original but probably cause I've never heard some of the imagery you've used. Very creative. Waiting..

hey love this chapter hope u can write more soon

With this chapter you just basically expose what love really is. I thought the chapter was quite honest. This chapter works because it is usually not in their character to be this way so I don't think they were being weird at all and the soul exposing part was very fitting for this particular moment. I also like how you didn't make it too melodramatic with the confessions now that would have made it surreal. Thanks for updating.

This chapter was beautifully written. It was so realistic. I'm happy they didn't get caught, cause too many bad happen to them, they needed time to just be together w/o all the problems.

Well yeah, Im insanely and I made this thing for the last chapter cause i thought would be funny, its probably just a little stupid, but w/e here it is:

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You see, there was a girl. She is an author. Not just because everyone on fictionpress loves her. It was because she loved to write.

You see, there was this story. And it was a pretty awesome story. And it was called Acid Rain.

You see, there’s this chapter in the story. And it went by the name "There was Always a Warmth Between Us." And it was wonderful, and painstakingly-sweet, and passionate, and mind-blowing all at the same time.

actually it's kinda realistic.. i can really imagine this happeneing to them.. cause keilan did kind of change for the better.. he's more open with esri.. and most couples who had sex for the first time actually talk about stuff like this to feel more intimate with each other and like i wanna be inside your soul thing.. yup

I love love love love LOVE this story. It's seriously great. All the little things you describe seem so real. And whenever Kielan smiles, for some reason I'm compelled to smile, too. Haha, I feel very emotionally involved in this story which can be attributed to your awesome writing. I can't wait to read more!

hey i really like this story i hope u update soon,

Aw, Kielan was being sweet in his own way. I did enjoy reading this chapter. Okay, your question is how do I feel about Kielan? Well I adore him for being the way he is. On a scale of 1 to 10... I really dislike rating things but I'll do it since this was a fast update. I give Kielan an 8 because Kielan doesn't pretend to be someone he isn't with Esri. Now that I've said this I hope he doesn't end up being an ** or cheat on Esri. Thanks for updating.

hey love this chapter hope u can write more soon