Very well written...good content as well...It's a very nice and gentle-like poem

Oh, your writing is juicy.

I don't know about stories having souls but this piece of poetry certainly does. What amazing imagery. You really have put your reader in the place of nature and we feel (or I did anyway) the oozing, smothering tarmac sludge and greedy maggot trains crawling across our skin like a bad case of the Heebie-Jeebies.

Anyway, I'll shut up now! How's the publishing of Gothina going?

Galleena